I had thought of some ideas for the adventure mode story in SSB4. I thought of the ideas in this part last night, and they might sound a bit weird, but it's a rough draft. I plan on posting them somewhere else with better grammar and such. I didn't steal any ideas from people, so if it seems I used an idea you had, it was pure coincidence.

This contains parts 1-10, seperated by paragraphs.

In front of Peach's castle, many people gathered to see the show. Residents of the Mushroom Kingdom and residents of Dreamland come to see Mario and Kirby in a fight. Peach is in her VIP seat to watch the fight. Meta Knight is perched ontop of the castle, looking mysterious as always. Mario and Kirby begin their fight. At the end, however, something happens. what appears to be a flying armada. this turns out to be Bowser and his army, obviously up to no good. Mario and Kirby start attacking the soldiers, while Meta Knight stays on the castle, ready to jump any moment. While Mario and Kirby are occupied, Bowser grabs Peach. Meta Knight jumps down now and heads for Bowser. However, Bowser holds up his arm, showing a bright gem, and mumbles something. He then dissapeared with Peach. the koopa troop retreated. however, it was too late, as Bowser was gone. Meta Knight explains what has happened, and they then go out to find Bowser and Peach.

In an open field, near a jungle now. a young kid is walking in the field, Lucas. while walking around, a weird monster appears out of nowehere. Lucas, scared, hides near a bush. Bowser, who has come here, notices Peach is missing. She must've been seperated while traveling somehow. Bowser calls his Koopa troop, who gets there quite fast, suprisingly. Bowser orders them to find Peach, knowing she probably couldn't have gone far. while seacrhing, Lucas is caught. Bowser orders his troops to attack Lucas, as he could've been spying. Lucas runs into the jungle, trying to desperatley escape the troops. He ends up getting surrounded. Scared to death, he ducks down and cowers. then , out of nowhere, a large ape jumps to the ground, Donkey Kong. DK starts fighting the troops, and they all eventually get defeated and retreat. DK walks up to Lucas, trying to comfort him. However, Lucas is a bit frightened by DK, but he manages to get Lucas to join him, after Lucas realizes DK had saved him. Dk puts Lucas on his back, and they start running through the jungle. Dk seems to be looking for something...

Peach is in a forest. She wakes up after something had seperated her in that weird moment she was kidnapped. All she knows is she is in some sort of tropical forest. she walks around for a bit, then comes to what appears to be a cliff. She looks down. She then realizes the forest if floating! the forest is on some sort of floating island. Then, out of nowhere, a metal claw grabs Peach. A large metal robot, which turns out to be Dr Eggman. She struggles to get out, but no luck. Dr Eggman begins to fly off, when something then hits the engines, causing them to fail. Another random blast, to the front of the robot this time. Then a blue blur runs past Eggman. The blue blur slows down, and reveals it is Sonic the Hedgehog. Eggman puts Peach down to take care of sonic personally. While she is free, she decides not to run, but to go to sonic's side and help him take down Eggman. After beating him, his backup engines activate and he escapes. Sonic takes Peach and gives chase through the forest.

In the deepest part of the forest, Sonic and Peach rest for a moment. Eggman has left the island, and they need to find the tornado to leave the island. they continue after a quick break, but find an abandoned and quite large robot. Taking no caution, Sonic goes up it, and hits it. He seems convinced it is deactivated. However, the robot awakens after being hit. He smashes Sonic, knocking him to the cliff. He is unable to get a good grasp, and falls. Peach is now one-on-one with this robot. then, out of nowhere, before the robot shoots a laser, an item comes out of nowehere at a fast speed, hitting the robot's hand. the item hits the ground, which turns out to be a boomerang. Then someone jumps out of nowhere, who appears to be the thrower. He stands up, and faces Peach. this man turns out to be Link, who ended up on the island through some mysterious power. He and Peach fight and destroy the robot. Peach, who is convinced sonic died, goes on, trying to forget, with Link by her side.

Meta Knight is flying around, looking for Peach and Bowser. He notices a floating island, and lands there. he lands near a large alter, with a large green diamond. When he goes to observe it, he is hit with a random attack. This is the gurdian of the Emerald, Knuckles. Protecting his emerald, he fights Meta Knight, who thinks Knuckles works for Bowser. after their fight, they realize who the true enemy is when eggman reappears on the island. He reaches the emerald, which he grabs, as Meta Knight and Knuckles didn't respond fast enough. eggman escapes the island with the emerald. The island shakes, and starts to fall into the ocean. Meta Knight and Knuckles glide off the island safely. However, they are unaware of Link and Peach, who also fell into the ocean, with the island.

Link wakes up to find him on a shore of a river, near the edge of a forest. Not knowing what caused the island to fall, he gets up and heads out. While he is walking around, he hears a battle. Walking towards the noise, he sees what appears to be a large snake-like creature attacking a group of colorful creatures and a perso in a spacesuit. This is Olimar and his Pikmin, fighting a Pileated Snagret. Link decides to help Olimar and starts attacking the Snagret with Olimar. After it is defeated, he and Olimar team up, and head on through the forest, with the Pikmin following.

After searching throughout the Mushroom Kingdom and finding nothing, he heads for a warp pipe which will take him out of the mushroom Kingdom. However, before he gets to the pipe, Bowser Jr intercepts him in his Megahammer robot. Bowser Jr shoots a bullet bill at Mario while he has a chance and mario won't have enough time to reatliate. Then a weird sound, and the bullet bill disappeared. Something jumps over his head, and shoots the same bullet bill at Megahammer, damaging it. The thing lands, revealing itself to be Yoshi. With Mario's faithful companion by his side, they take down Megahammer. The robot explodes, but Bowser Jr ejected before. He escapes into the pipe, and Mario and yoshi jump in after him, not knowing where the pipe leads to.

DK and Lucas exit the forest and encounter a mountain. Lucas is afraid to climb it, but DK convinces him it's safe. After a tedious climb, they reach a large mountain top. However, what they see is a fight between 2 creatures. They get closer, and see they are Lucario and Mewtwo. Apparently, Mewtwo is working with the villains, and Lucario tried to intervene. Mewtwo knocks Lucario off the mountain, but he manages to gra a ledge. Mewtwo then spots Lucas and DK. Dk, being the honorable monkey he is, tries to pick a fight with Mewtwo. Lucas, knowing he has to man up, decides to fight, despite being very scared. After DK and Lucas defeat Mewtwo, he teleports off the mountain and escapes. DK and Lucas help Lucario up, and they decide to team up and track down Mewtwo.

Kirby is riding his warp star, but no luck finding Bowser or Peach. He lands in a large field. It is night, so Kirby decided to find a place to rest. However, he noticed something pop out of the ground. A skeleton creature came out and was heading towards Kirby. Soon, a whole army of them was heading for Kirby. while trying to fight them, he noticed a puff of smoke, and a mysterious figure popped out of the smoke. The mysterious figure was Shiek, who appeared to help Kirby fight the skeletons, which were Stalchildren. after they were gone, Shiek transformed into Zelda. Knowing who the stalchildren were working for, she, along with Kirby, teamed up to find him. She transformed into Shiek and she and Kirby headed off on the warp star.

At a fortress a while away, a package is outside the door. the door of the fortress opens. A robot is at the door. Not knowing what to do with the package, the robot picks it up and brings it to the storage room. the package then starts to move after the robot has left. A man pops out of the package - Solid Snake. He gets a call from Colonel, who asks if he entered the base, and tells him to find the power source within. solid snake travels through the fortress when he encounters what appears to be a fight. He gets closer, and sees a blue robot around a bunch of destroyed robots. Solid Snake gets closer, but the blue robot sees him. He turns around and points his arm cannon at him. solid snake gets ready to fight, but then he notices more robots surround them. they realize that they are on a similar mission, and take oout the enemy robots. The blue robot turns out to be Mega Man, who is trying to take down the fortress as well. They team up on the adventure and head through the fortress.

cool man, dis is intresting. im making progress on movesets

Pikmintendo wrote:cool man, dis is intresting. im making progress on movesets

Movesets is for another day. You can work on them, but I'll focus most on them once I finish the story. Maybe Gayman would help with that.

@zman. ikno, but "cool" is under the character limit.

I only have bits of story, so i never put them together :/

PKMN Trainer (Red) is flying in the sky with Charizard. When an airship appears in front of them. It starts shotting at Red then Bowser Jr. pops out. Red says "Go Charizard" then it goes flying at high speed towards Bowser Jr. Charizard then grabs him, and flies down, with Red still on top of Charizard. (Imagine in the anime, how he uses Seismic Toss) They dive down to the ground, when Bowser Jr. escapes from his arms. Then the two have a "Brawl"

Pretty nice story idea you've got here. Hopefully there will be more, as I'm interested already.

I have created the next 5 parts in the story. If there is a spelling or grammar problem, it will get fixed eventually.


A cottage deep in the jungle. Peach wakes up in the cottage, not knowing what happened to her. She walks out to see where she is. While outside, she notices something swinging throughout the trees. The creature lands in front of her: it is Diddy Kong. Diddy tells Peach (through charades, since he can't speak) he saw her on the beach unconcious and saves her. Peach thanks him, and she tells him how she ended up like that. Diddy decided that he and she should find this egg person, since he is convinced he had to do with the falling of the island. Peach agrees, and they head off into the forest.

An island in the middle of the ocean. Sonic lies on the beach. He wakes up, not knowing where he is. Thinking what this island is, he goes to the mountain on the island. He reaches the peak of the mountain, and decides to look outwards. He sees nothing but ocean. He would run, but he was weak from the huge fall, and running to a mountain top wore him out. Then, flying above him, is what appears to be fighter jet. He yells as loud as he can, hoping he hears them. the jet continues moving forward. Then it turns around and starts to head down. Sonic knows that the jet came back and he jumps on the jet as it passes by. The jet lands in a large valley. Sonic jumps off, and the pilot jumps out of the jet. The pilot is Fox McCloud. He has been trying to find his friend, who was blasted out of the sky by a large airship. Sonic agrees to help, and he and Fox head through the valley.

A castle in a desert land. In the throne room, a king sits on the throne: King Dedede. Calling his servants in, he asks for what is happening. They mention the weird things happening in the middle of the desert. King Dedede, interested, decides he will go see what's happening. He proceeds through the desert, looking to see what's happening. Dedede gets to the site. He sees an weird electric thing flying through the air very fast. what appears to be a red diamond and a small, yellow mouse: Pikachu. what startled Dedede, though, was the large, black dragon, causing a huge electrical storm. Pikachu is being hurt, and the diamond seems to be adding to the power. The dragon looks like it has no control. Dedede runs up to the diamond and hits it away, cauing the electric storm to end. The black dragon, which is the legendary pokemon Zekrom, has gone beserk and starts attack dedede. Pikachu, now recovering, decides to help Dedede. they fight and take down Zekom, who seems to be undercontrol. Zekrom flies away, and Dedede picks up the gem. He puts it in his robe, and decides to find more of these gleaming gems. Pikachu, thankful for Dedede, decides to tag along with him, and they head through the desert.

Near the deepest part of a forest. Link and Olimar see a large tree which seems to go up forever. Thinking they might find something, they begin climbing. Halfway up the tree, they see something glowing at the top. Thinking it will be important, they head up. They reach the top and see what appears to be an emerald. Olimar walks up, thinking it's a treasure. They pick it up, and head down the tree. Halfway down, however, a large thing had ran into Olimar and Link, breaking the branch. They fell down, hitting the ground hard. Olimar was still holding the emerald. a robot landed on the ground. A metal hedgehog, Metal Sonic, was standing over Olimar, about to attack him. then something jumped onto the robot. Mario lands after jumping on him and Yoshi follows. Metal Sonic steps back a bit, ready to escape, when Bowser Jr appears, ready to help Metal Sonic. However, the heroes defeat the two, and they run off. Now together, they all decide to team up and stop these menaces.

Solid snake and Mega Man continue through the fortress, heading towards the center of the base. after many traps and spikes, they get to the center. In a case guarded by lasers, is a jewel, which snake says is a mystical gem called a Chaos emerald: there are 7 in total, he said, that contain incredible amounts of power. After deactivating the lasers, they approach the case. Before they reach, a robot appears out of nowehere. Snake looks at the letters on its side: R.O.B. They engage the robot in a battle. After they win, they take the emerald. However, an alarm rings, and a lockdown starts. They need to find a way to escape. R.O.B. decides to help them, as we was forced to guard the case. They manage to escape the fortress. snake and Mega Man agree to team up from here and find more Chaos Emeralds. R.O.B., looking lonely, watches them leave. Mega Man looks back, sees how lonely he is, and invites him to join them. R.O.B. joins, and Snake calls Colonel, who sends them a helicopter, and they proceed on their mission.

Add Zero!
OH! AND A GUEST APPEARANCE BY MMMMORSHU!
But honestly, quite an interesting plot/story you have there. There should be a dramatic scene with this music: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8eI1yv99oOs

this is one instreasting book this is! yes quiet good!

When will this end?

It will never end......it is an endless loop of disaster and chaos....

Parts 16-20 of my story. Basically, more characters are introduced, and more things happen, including a mysterious person who appears at the end of two parts...

still grammatical and spelling errors, which will be fixed in a finalization of my story.

Also, I plan on adding more detail later on.

Lucas, DK, and Lucario are traveling down a mountain path. They had finished a long climb down the mountain, and are heading off towards what appears to be a valley. then 2 figures appear in front of them. It is Mewtwo and a Gengar. The 3 prepare themselves, but then Mewtwo steps back, and Gengar puts them to sleep. Once they are asleep, the pokemon proceeds to attack with Nightmare. After this is done, Mewtwo and Gengar leave. In the nightmare, Lucas, DK, and Lucario see the evil, warped world they have entered. They decide to go through and find an exit. Lucas is a little slow at first: he is very scared of this world. They reach what appears to be a deadend. They turn around to go back, but then the world started turning black, and everything was an endless void. all they could see was blackness. Then something was appearing in front of them: a red swirl. It started moaning, and soon it formed into a large, red, twisted monster: Giygas. they prepared to fight it, but Lucas was frozen from fear. DK snapped him out of it. Lucas, still timid, decided to fight this thing with them. They managed to defeat Giygas. then the world started spinning: not long after, they woke up. when they woke up, they realized they were in the valley somehow. They stood up, and saw someone standing there: it was Pit, who had saved them from Mewtwo and Gengar preparing an attack. He managed to carry the 3 into the valley where they would be safe. the 3 of thank Pit, and ask f he would like to join them on their adventure. He agrees, and they head off through the valley.

An incredibly huge castle on the far edge of the valley. It seems to extend forever into the sky and to the sides. Sonic and Fox look at each other, nod heads, and run inside. They enter the foyer and notice the decal: very gothic. There are many doors, leading to many rooms. At the end of the foyer, is a huge door. Fox tries to open it: locked. Thinking they have to find a key, they head into one of the rooms. they start heading through the large hallways: Bowser's troops occupy this hallway. They fight through and reach a large bedroom. They go through drawers, when Sonic ends up hitting a switch. A hidden staircase appears. They look into it, and head down. Once they are down there, in a very large dungeon, they see someone chained to the wall. A young man in a red hat is chained there. The kid seems to be knocked out. Before they can do anything, a beast drops from the ceiling. A large flower-like creature appeared behind them: Petey Piranha. Sonic and Fox fight Petey. After he is defeated, he spits up a key. The key unlocks the chains of the young man. They release the latches, and the boy falls. He wakes up shortly after, and thanks them. He said he's a Pokemon Trainer, and was captured by the Koopa Troop after he was trying to find their plans. The 3 team up and decide to continue exploring this castle.

Kirby and Zelda enter a graveyard near the village. Night was drawing near, and the graveyard got creepier every minute. Night had fallen, and the graveyard was pitch-black. Kirby then notiiced something staring at him in the shadow of a gravestone. Kirby, being curious, walked closer to it. then it jumped out screaming: a weird-looking rabbit attacked him. Then a whole bunch or rabbits things popped out, screaming and attacking. Kirby and Zelda weren't able to hold them all off. then a weird thing dropped from a cliff and started keeping back the rabbit things using what appeared to be a plunger gun. After they all retreated, the thing revealed himself as Rayman. Zelda explains what those things are, and what they are doing. Rayman says they are Rabbids, weird little creatures that have no idea what they are doing, and he is looking for something inside the cave in the graveyard. The 3 of them decide to check out the cave together, and run inside. While they walk in, someone watches them enter on a cliff, and heads in a different direction.

It's a starry, night sky. Meta Knight and Knuckles are gliding in the night. They have been searching for anything, something, for a long time, but found nothing. Then they come to an incredibly huge castle. They land on one of the towers, seeing if the castle holds a secret. They enter the tower door, and get down the stairs: the room they enter appears to be a royal bedroom. But someone is already in this room. Thinking MK and Knuckles are intruders, he jumps out and attacks: it is Ike. MK holds Knuckles back: he wants a one-on-one fight with Ike. Halfway through the fight, both worn out, a knock is heard at the door. they all make no noise. The door is knocked down, and a hammer Bro enters. Seeing the three, he calls for other troops. MK, Knuckles, and Ike team up and take on the troop. Once they are gone, they decide to continue exploring the castle, teamed up. They continue down the hall, keeping their guards up.

Peach and Diddy are walking through the forest. It is still night. they have found nothing but trees and plants. Peach is beginning to lose hope. But then something appeared: a weird scarecrow-looking thing. He says his name is the Skull Kid, and can't let them go any further. He grabs Peach and captures her in some magic forcefield. He prepares to attack Diddy, but before he can, he is shot by something. Someone drops from the sky, and points his blaster at Skull Kid: it is Falco. He attacks Skull Kid, along with Diddy, and defeat him. He runs off, with Peach, once he s defeated. Diddy and Falco start chasing him, he holds up a gem and says something, and dissapears. They decide they need to track him down, and run off, through the forest. A mysterious figure watches them, and watched the entire fight. He turns back and escapes among the trees.

Side note:

MrGayManWatch wrote:When will this end?

The story will go on for a while. I don't know how long, but I'm trying not to make it short; I don't want this story short.

HOLY SHIT MY EYES!! MY EYES!! ok i see u r in to it, try to make it more "Nintendo Theme"

Mr. GayManWatch wrote:HOLY SHIT MY EYES!! MY EYES!! ok i see u r in to it, try to make it more "Nintendo Theme"

I will try. I'm planning on adding more Nintendo characters (the only other 3rd party character I MIGHT add is Zero from Mega Man). Also, the emeralds aren't the only powerful item to appear. I'm trying to add stuff like Power Stars, Shine Sprites, the Triforce, and anything else I might be able to think of.

and if the color hurts to much, I can change

zmanrwks wrote:

Mr. GayManWatch wrote:HOLY SHIT MY EYES!! MY EYES!! ok i see u r in to it, try to make it more "Nintendo Theme"

I will try. I'm planning on adding more Nintendo characters (the only other 3rd party character I MIGHT add is Zero from Mega Man). Also, the emeralds aren't the only powerful item to appear. I'm trying to add stuff like Power Stars, Shine Sprites, the Triforce, and anything else I might be able to think of.

and if the color hurts to much, I can change

Emeralds as in Sonic Emeralds? I swear the fact they put Sonic in brawl makes me peeesed. They shouldn't have added Sonic in the first place imo. :/ I loved the brawl story line except for how all the R.O.B.s died

Anyways, for SSB4, they should give the story a darker tone. They should include the shroobs or somethin. :3

KingDrybones wrote:

zmanrwks wrote:

Mr. GayManWatch wrote:HOLY SHIT MY EYES!! MY EYES!! ok i see u r in to it, try to make it more "Nintendo Theme"

I will try. I'm planning on adding more Nintendo characters (the only other 3rd party character I MIGHT add is Zero from Mega Man). Also, the emeralds aren't the only powerful item to appear. I'm trying to add stuff like Power Stars, Shine Sprites, the Triforce, and anything else I might be able to think of.

and if the color hurts to much, I can change

Emeralds as in Sonic Emeralds? I swear the fact they put Sonic in brawl makes me peeesed. They shouldn't have added Sonic in the first place imo. :/ I loved the brawl story line except for how all the R.O.B.s died

Anyways, for SSB4, they should give the story a darker tone. They should include the shroobs or somethin. :3

Add Mewtwo, Bowser Jr. King K. Rool, Black Shadow, and Dark Samus, Story can speak for it's self